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Nothing bad.

You started to walk through the corridor in the left and heard a noise behind you.

-Hey, wait!-The voice said. It was that girl again. She looked at you and the to the key in your hands.-What number is it?

-21.-you answered, looking at the keys.

-Oh.-her eyes widened.-Then you'll may need this.-she said,searching in her bag and throwing something at you.

It was a white and red colored ball, with a little button. You sighed and kept walking, looking the ball closely, and then remembered.

It was that ball from Pokemon series. The one you use to catch the pokemons.
Why would you keep that, anyway? Well, probably you'll just have to spend the night with some creepy gamer and go home in the morning. Nothing too bad.

Travelling through the long corridor, reading all the numbers of the doors, you found the room 21. The door was scratched, making strange symbols, and that didn't make you feel better. With shaky hands you inserted the key and opened the door, entering the room.

The only thing you felt was darkness and coldness. You tried looking around one more time.
There were two little red lights in the corner of the room, a big bed in the middle of the room and some pokeballs on the bed. All the other things were too difficult to determinate what they were.

You were gonna go back and talk with that girl about this, you can't sleep in such a room!
A squeak stoped you. Looking at your feet, you saw a little shape. It was hugging your feet and squeaking. You were scared, but your hands picked up that thing.

It was a Pokemon. You didn't remember exactly who was. It was pink, with a big head, and the most shocking thing, was that a part of his body was missing, It was a Pokemon. You didn't remember exactly who was.
You kept staring at him, not sure how to react. The pokemon was basically begging you to stay with him, and that was actually pretty cute (ignoring that he was half-cuted and the blood was dripping to the floor.)

Your lips curved into a smile as you hugged the pokemon and sat on the bed. He stoped crying and just kept hugging you, not smiling but happy. You started to fall asleep but a young voice sounded.

-You seem to care about him.-the voice said, making you jump and look everywhere, scared, trying to find where the voice came from. You stared to the end of the bed, where the two little red lights were standing.

-W-Where are you?-you said.

-I'm right here, in front of you. I'll turn the light up, but please, don't scream!-he answered.- Promise it.

-A-Alright.-you hugged tight the pokemon.

The lights turned up and you saw a boy. He has short black hair, black empty eyes with red lights as corneas, and his limbs were missing. He was floating, in the middle of the room.

You wanted to scream, but you promised not to. Also, that was pretty normal considering that you were hugging a television monster that was dripping blood in your T-Shirt. The boy looked at you with a sad smile.

-You didn't scream.-he said, floating near you.

-Yeah, as I promised.-you tried your best to smile at him, but he just looked so sad that you wanted to cry.-Is he yours?-you said, pointing at the pink pokemon.

-Yes.-he said, sitting next to you.-He was my friend.

-He WAS your friend?-you satarted rubbing the pokemons head.

-Before I died, you know.-he said, awkwardly blushing.-He is a Celebi.

-I thought Celebie was green...-you looked at the boy sadly.-And his organs weren't exposed.

-Yeah, well, they are, but...-he didn't continue, just stayed there, not knowing what to say. You changed the subject.

-So...what's your name? I'm (______).-smiling at him, you sat the pokemon on your lap.

-I'm Silver. Lost Silver. People usually forget me.-he said, sadly staring to the ground.- Your name is cute. You blushed and stared at him.

-...I remember you.-he looked at you, his eyes widened and his mouth was wide open. You smiled at his reaction.-You are the player's character in some pokemon games, right? I usually choose you!

His lips curved into a big smile. He looks really cute when he smiles.

-You remember me...-he said.-...Thank you.-you were going to reply, but then something stopped you. You felt something really cold touch your cheek.
Now in both cheeks.

-You...-he started.-You are so warm...-he went closer to you, looking directly in your eyes.

-Are you...touching me?-you asked.

-Y-Yes...-he said, blushing.-I don't have limbs, but I have something...similar.
His face went closer to yours, and your lips brushed together. Then he kissed you, sweetly as he could. His lips were so cold, probably because he was dead. He broked the kiss and looked at you, smiling.- So, you are going to sleep with me?

-Y-Yeah...-you were a little confused and dizzy because of the kiss, trying to process what happened.

-Well, then...-he looked at your bag, and then entered his hand. After a few seconds searching, he took the pokeball that the girl gave you.

-I choose you, (____)!-he said, throwing the ball to the floor and kissing you again.
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:iconlazypoolplz: I'm so lazy.

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OXOBlackRoseOXO Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  New Deviant
JulkaOsuch Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2015  Student Artist
This was actually cute
Snivystorm15 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Hnnngh it's soooooo ADORABLE!!!
Enderbel Featured By Owner Edited Sep 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Lol 21😅
What's nine plus ten? 21 u stupid XD

I'm not funny 😓😓😅😓😂😑😑
Bonnie-Freddy Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
(( Lost Silver: I choose you! Maddie!! ))

(( Me: Hahahaha- ))

(( Lost Sliver: :3 ))
LaughingAlanna Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Student Writer
The ending was so cheesey. I love it!
ThatRedGirl Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh God the feels~
The ending was so fucking cute~
Lunar-Night000 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room.
DerpanatorCXL Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bish dafauk fis duddint wurk..
Snivystorm15 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
And here's another True Believer who can't just keep their shit to themselves while people are trying to enjoy what they like
Bonnie-CPPS Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015  Student Artist
Don't do it - Don't die.
Do it - Get trolled.
Lolhate123 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Student Artist
:/ ill pass.
Eather way its a lose-lose.
Do it, get kissed.
Dont do it, die.
Id rather not do any.
Lunar-Night000 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015
*Sigh* Don't like, don't read/reply. Common sense bruh =.= sigh  
Sepheera1 Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Student Artist
Silver used "KISS" It's super effective! Reader became confused. 
Reader snapped out of confusion and used "MIMMICK"! Reader used "KISS" on Silver.
kxk101 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2015
xD lol so cute
Kurohime151 Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist

That comment made me laugh out laugh out loud. I think almost woke up my family.
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015
So cute >w<
SleepyCancer Featured By Owner Edited Apr 30, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Silver used "Kiss"! It's super effective! Reader became confused!
SavannaLols Featured By Owner Edited Jan 4, 2015
-I choose you, Savanna!-he said, throwing the ball to the floor and kissing you again.

Me: Dafuq...? ooooh then I''ll be the Clearifible to your Machoke!

Lost Silver: *Blushes and wipes away a fake tear* That was the most beautiful thing I have ever heard!

Me:*Uses tackle* That my friend was indeed a speech of love it may be short but just like Aberham Lincoln it will be remembered!
NoraOuran90 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015
creepypastalemonlove Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cameron-The-Cat Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*gigles* "pika pika" *kiss* "CAMERON used KISS"
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
( looks at poke ball on ground ) DA heck? ( looks at silver with derp face ) .3. 
Bonnie-CPPS Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015  Student Artist
'DA heck?' Pun intended XD
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Meh,I say " Da heck " instead of " the heck ". :3 slang of an American~
TeppitGirl Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
OMG this comment x3
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
X3 lol ikr,I'm too good XD PIKAAAAAAAACHUUUUU <3
Ginger2017 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014
Sooo Kawaii!
CancerousArcher Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SO adorable! I just want them to be real, even though they're killers, Lost Silver needs a hug everyday..;u; Also, great job!
xxnillyxx Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DAW!!Jigglypuff: Base 
Bonnie-CPPS Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015  Student Artist
xxnillyxx Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh my goodness, to be honest i didnt notice until you said so XD
Bonnie-CPPS Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2015  Student Artist
xxnillyxx Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
IloveIchigo101 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
KamikazeKaori Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Aww~ This story is so cute and adorable!! :3
bowtiesbecool Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
im not scared off creepypasta, i feel bad for them.
if i could of met BEN, we could play video games
if i could of met Jeff, we- well we would probably kill together
i play pokemon to so i would have played with Silver ALL THE FRIGIN TIME!!
im not scared...
im sad.
Bonnie-Freddy Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
(( Creepypasta's would kill you- ))
Tiana2002Lockhart Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
BRVR too! don't forget about him
elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
also glitchy red
AmayaxXxRin Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for this Oneshot :3
Everytime I read Lost Silvers story I want to cry T^T And I truly understand the urge to hug him, he's just so adorable *-*
I really like this story with him and hope you may write some more because your stile of writing is pretty good :3

Best Wishes, Amaya Rin

PS: Sry if my english isn't worth to be called even good but I hope you still understand what I wanted to say >///<
Closedmadness Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014
I understood everything, and I'm glad that you liked the story! ^_^
pear6900 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This is so adorable! XD
pear6900 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This is so adorable! XD
Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014   Writer
Me in the story(after seeing Silver): *thinking* Don't scream, don't scream....

Me in real life(after seeing Silver) (my literal reaction whenever I see a pic or read a story about Silver): Awwww! *hugs* I'm sorry, but you look so huggable!!! ^3^
mabelxpines13 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
masky and hoodie? but plz ther are so cute and not rough do you know!
jedwa123 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
The ending was so adorable! I friggin love Lost Silver/Gold cause he's so shy and cute!(unlike ALOT of creepypastas)
Dark-Angel-Lana Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't get the pokéball idea
nightshadow-fuzzy Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*grins wide*
zoeythecat124 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Artist
that so cuteCute Emoticon Blushing Emote - Kitty glomp lost silver is so cuteInekoitplz 
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